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The Birthday Poem



I bet most of you people have read about my blog post for Caroline’s birthday right? And also most of you have read the Hidden Message behind this poem from Caroline’s blog post right? If you don’t, I reveal it here.

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I seek a gift, Cruising along the ocean breeze,
Love was a myth, At least until I saw you, miss,
Off we go adrift. Reaching for what we both had missed,
Vow to not ever grief, Over the pact we both conceived,
Each moment may be brief, Love still grow fonder like a kiss,
Yearn and if, In this ride we through all rift
Our love will be received, Never broken never adrift,
Until conceive, Eternal bond that we wished.

If you take all the capital letters that I had placed in this poem. It will come out like this.

I seek a gift, Cruising along the ocean breeze,
Love was a myth, At least until I saw you, miss,
Off we go adrift. Reaching for what we both had missed,
Vow to not ever grief, Over the pact we both conceived,
Each moment may be brief, Love still grow fonder like a kiss,
Yearn and if, In this ride we through all rift
Our love will be received, Never broken never adrift,
Until conceive, Eternal bond that we wished.

Yeah…it spells out as I LOVE YOU CAROLINE. Yeah, I do intend this from the very beginning for several reasons.

1. I want it to be special that way.

2. A sole proof that I’m the original author for this poem.

Actually I only intend to reveal the hidden meaning in this post and I wonder if anyone observant enough to spot the message. Don’t include Caroline because she wasn’t aware of it until I told her about it. LOL. As many people still doubt that I wrote this by myself, I do wanted to let you guys know that I took Literature in English Language in STPM and score an A for that subject as well. And I started the subject half a year later than other students in my class.

Let me further explain in detail what is the meaning of this poem lines by lines

I seek a gift, Cruising along the ocean breeze,
To me, Carol is like a gift for me. There is a vast ocean in between our states, Selangor and Sabah. As though the ocean(South China Sea) breeze brought it across the ocean to me.

Love was a myth, At least until I saw you, miss,
In short, I fell in love. Myth means non-existent. It does not exist within me until I saw Carol in my life.

Off we go adrift, Reaching for what we both had missed,
Start a relationship that we two wished it should happen earlier?

Vow to not ever grief, Over the pact we both conceived,
Never regret the decision that we made to be together.

Each moment may be brief, Love still grow fonder like a kiss,
As most know, me n her is in a long distance relationship. That’s why the moments that we can meet each other are very brief/short. But we still grow fonder like a kiss. Why like a kiss? Don’t you guys agree that once you start kissing, more things will followed up after that? Love grows and also (insert your own version of naughty moments).

Yearn and if, In this ride we through all rift,
We hope that our relationship will go through all obstacles and if that happens, read next line…

Our love will be received, Never broken never adrift,
It just means that our love is real and we shall not be apart.

Until conceive, Eternal bond that we wished.
When all that happens, we can be together forever. Hopefully of course and fingers crossed.

So basically that’s what my poem is about. I don’t think it is as great because I’m not a magnificent poet and the words I used are pretty much not as flowery as it should be. I used an hour plus to come out with this due to many trial and error of slotting in the hidden message. but to complete only this poem, took me about 30 minutes only. That’s all for now. Still doubt I wrote this? Nothing else I can do. LOL

P/S: I used to write songs, both love songs and rap songs, when I’m younger but I don’t think those are any good as I cannot come out with any good music to accompany the songs. Ah, this makes me feel like starting to write again.

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  1. So sweet!!
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  2. Caroline is very special to you and I am sure that she is so lucky to have you. Many people like me who often visit your site is aware of the things that you are sharing about Caroline. I am pretty sure you really love her so much.
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